"these scares"

bibleworm · 05-28-2005, 09:39 PM

these scars

you look at someone and you see scars,

and if you dont see them you still know they are there,

these scars tell a story,

a story that cannot be spoken,nor written,

these scars,they are memories,

that are to hard to tell,

these scars are sweet and yet sad,

only you know these scars,

these scars that cover your body,

lets you know that they are only a reflection

of your heart.

By Amie Jo

bibleworm · 05-28-2005, 10:49 PM

please, tell me what you think!

HeavenBound · 05-28-2005, 10:51 PM

I think it is a very very good poem! Keep writing! Grrreat write, good job!

quiet_one88 · 05-28-2005, 11:11 PM

Great job! It was very interesting!

A2J · 05-29-2005, 12:23 PM

its such a pretty poem!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!

MyJoyOverflows · 05-29-2005, 04:02 PM

very nice...keep it up!

bibleworm · 05-30-2005, 04:50 PM

i posted this poem at a different forum and everyone says it reminds them of christ,does it remind you of christ?

MyJoyOverflows · 05-30-2005, 09:31 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by bibleworm

i posted this poem at a different forum and everyone says it reminds them of christ,does it remind you of christ?

I can see that...

HeavenBound · 05-30-2005, 10:19 PM

AmieJo,
Please post more poems!

quiet_one88 · 05-30-2005, 10:37 PM

Thats an amazing line because of what Christ did for us is wonderful and sweet, because then we have eternal life.

But its also sad that He had to go through all that pain.

05-28-2005, 09:39 PM	#1
bibleworm bibleworm Edit Disciple	"these scars" these scars you look at someone and you see scars, and if you dont see them you still know they are there, these scars tell a story, a story that cannot be spoken,nor written, these scars,they are memories, that are to hard to tell, these scars are sweet and yet sad, only you know these scars, these scars that cover your body, lets you know that they are only a reflection of your heart. By Amie Jo __________________ heart for brazil laugh a lot it will save your life everyone says im crazy ,which is true!!! Amie Jo Last edited by bibleworm; 05-29-2005 at 07:36 PM..
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05-28-2005, 10:49 PM	#2
bibleworm bibleworm Edit Disciple	please, tell me what you think! __________________ heart for brazil laugh a lot it will save your life everyone says im crazy ,which is true!!! Amie Jo
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05-28-2005, 10:51 PM	#3
HeavenBound HeavenBound Edit Prophet/Prophetess	I think it is a very very good poem! Keep writing! Grrreat write, good job! __________________ "We have just enough Religion to make us HATE, but not enough to make us LOVE one Another..." -Jonathan Swift Who could hate a Man, who thought about YOU on the Cross?
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05-28-2005, 11:11 PM	#4
quiet_one88 quiet_one88 Edit Disciple	Great job! It was very interesting!
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05-29-2005, 12:23 PM	#5
A2J A2J Edit Disciple	its such a pretty poem!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!
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05-29-2005, 04:02 PM	#6
MyJoyOverflows MyJoyOverflows Edit Prophet/Prophetess	very nice...keep it up!
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05-30-2005, 04:50 PM	#7
bibleworm bibleworm Edit Disciple	i posted this poem at a different forum and everyone says it reminds them of christ,does it remind you of christ? __________________ heart for brazil laugh a lot it will save your life everyone says im crazy ,which is true!!! Amie Jo
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05-30-2005, 10:19 PM	#9
HeavenBound HeavenBound Edit Prophet/Prophetess	AmieJo, Please post more poems! __________________ "We have just enough Religion to make us HATE, but not enough to make us LOVE one Another..." -Jonathan Swift Who could hate a Man, who thought about YOU on the Cross?
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05-30-2005, 10:37 PM	#10
quiet_one88 quiet_one88 Edit Disciple	These scars are sweet yet sad . . . -Amie Jo Thats an amazing line because of what Christ did for us is wonderful and sweet, because then we have eternal life. But its also sad that He had to go through all that pain.
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