This is really hard for me to post!!!

05-24-2005, 03:02 PM

I've always written poems but I never like to share them with anyone. I don't know why it just makes me feel embarrased. This is a huge step for me!! Those who know me know that I'm really out going and I'm definitely not shy!! But with poems I just totally feel embarrased!!! I'm going to post something I wrote yesterday. It's about what it feels like to be a teenager.

Let Those Teenage Tears Flow
Let those teenage tears flow
Don't ever try to stop them
Don't ever feel bad because of them
Let those teenage tears flow
Even though they don't have a reason to do so
Even though they don't have permission to do so
Let those teenage tears flow
The tears that people critizice
The tears that people can't stand
Let those teenage tears flow
The tears that break your heart
The tears that no one understands
Let those teenage tears flow
There's Someone who loves your tears
And keeps them locked tight in His heart
Let those teenage tears flow
You'll hear a Voice from heaven say: "I love you"
That same Voice will say: "My child...
let those teenage tears flow."

I want honest opinions and I'm seriously considering forgetting about pressing "Submit New Thread!!!" I wrote this yesterday while I was crying my heart out and I heard those that Voice say those two sentences!!!

amigo · 05-24-2005, 03:27 PM

I know what you mean Nikki, but listen! That was wonderful beyond words! You have a gift...God has given it to you so use it girl!

MyJoyOverflows · 05-24-2005, 10:39 PM

that was beautiful!!

iryn_gracee · 05-25-2005, 12:35 AM

that was nice.

05-26-2005, 04:51 PM

*plays with her hair nervously* ThanQ for your feedback guys!! I'm sorry, it's just that I'm such a

sometimes!!!

I'm relaxed now.

05-26-2005, 05:05 PM

Nikki that was awsome! I totaly heart that poem you wrote. You have a true talent

hehe.

*Anne* · 05-26-2005, 10:41 PM

thats awesome! keep up the good work ( and post some of it!!)

krystal · 05-26-2005, 11:45 PM

You should be very grateful for the gift you have been giving. Please continue to share

05-26-2005, 11:57 PM

That was such a great poem! I'm so into reading poetry and short stories, so I can't wait to hear more from you! Keep up the great work!

05-27-2005, 03:37 PM

ThanQ guys!!!

05-24-2005, 03:02 PM	#1
1cutemonki 1cutemonki Edit Guest	This is really hard for me to post!!! I've always written poems but I never like to share them with anyone. I don't know why it just makes me feel embarrased. This is a huge step for me!! Those who know me know that I'm really out going and I'm definitely not shy!! But with poems I just totally feel embarrased!!! I'm going to post something I wrote yesterday. It's about what it feels like to be a teenager. Let Those Teenage Tears Flow Let those teenage tears flow Don't ever try to stop them Don't ever feel bad because of them Let those teenage tears flow Even though they don't have a reason to do so Even though they don't have permission to do so Let those teenage tears flow The tears that people critizice The tears that people can't stand Let those teenage tears flow The tears that break your heart The tears that no one understands Let those teenage tears flow There's Someone who loves your tears And keeps them locked tight in His heart Let those teenage tears flow You'll hear a Voice from heaven say: "I love you" That same Voice will say: "My child... let those teenage tears flow." I want honest opinions and I'm seriously considering forgetting about pressing "Submit New Thread!!!" I wrote this yesterday while I was crying my heart out and I heard those that Voice say those two sentences!!!

05-24-2005, 03:27 PM	#2
amigo amigo Edit Prophet/Prophetess	I know what you mean Nikki, but listen! That was wonderful beyond words! You have a gift...God has given it to you so use it girl! __________________ He ain't the leavin' kind He'd never walk away Even from those who dont believe And wanna leave him behind He ain't the leavin' kind
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05-24-2005, 10:39 PM	#3
MyJoyOverflows MyJoyOverflows Edit Prophet/Prophetess	that was beautiful!!
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05-25-2005, 12:35 AM	#4
iryn_gracee iryn_gracee Edit AY! Newbie	that was nice. __________________ **my life is so complicated!**
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05-26-2005, 05:05 PM	#6
Abby Abby Edit Guest	That was great =D Nikki that was awsome! I totaly heart that poem you wrote. You have a true talent hehe.

05-26-2005, 04:51 PM	#5
1cutemonki 1cutemonki Edit Guest	plays with her hair nervously ThanQ for your feedback guys!! I'm sorry, it's just that I'm such a sometimes!!! I'm relaxed now.

05-26-2005, 10:41 PM	#7
Anne Anne Edit Apostle	thats awesome! keep up the good work ( and post some of it!!) __________________ Rawker Chic with a Passion 4 life
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05-26-2005, 11:45 PM	#8
krystal krystal Edit Prophet/Prophetess	You should be very grateful for the gift you have been giving. Please continue to share __________________ Krystal
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05-26-2005, 11:57 PM	#9
Livin4Christ Livin4Christ Edit Guest	Great Job! That was such a great poem! I'm so into reading poetry and short stories, so I can't wait to hear more from you! Keep up the great work!

05-27-2005, 03:37 PM	#10
1cutemonki 1cutemonki Edit Guest	ThanQ guys!!!