Ode to my father above..

A2J · 05-16-2005, 12:59 PM

This isnt very good but I just felt in the mood to write an ode..
An ode for anyone who dosent know is like tribute or praise... It is usually written really solemn but im goin 2 change it a bit. I just realized theres odes of Soloman....lol...didnt know tht. This is just pretty random though!!!

Ode to my father above

My father above is God..
He watches over me constantly
Every step I take, he cares.
He is amazing.
He is loving too.
He is my saviour and gives me my salvation.
Without him is being without air
God is essential
We can never pay him back for his great sacrifice.
He is the alpha and omega.
help me be ready for the day he comes back.

amigo · 05-16-2005, 01:02 PM

I thought that was great! Thank you for sharing it with us! I will show my ignorance but what in the world is an ode?

A2J · 05-16-2005, 01:04 PM

Its like a tribute to someone who is alive... Im not good explainin guff, so the opposite of ode is an elergy which would be written to someone who is dead...lol....

I dont know how to explain myself!!!

amigo · 05-16-2005, 01:06 PM

I feel ya there! I can't explain anything well!

A2J · 05-16-2005, 01:07 PM

here's an ode i found on the net tht soloman has written...His are totally amazing and stunning

The Odes of Solomon

Ode XVII
I was crowned by God,
by a crown alive.

and my Lord justified me.
He became my certain salvation.

I was freed from myself
and uncondemned.
The chains fell from my wrists.

I took on the face and ways of a new person,
walked in him and was redeemed.

The thought of truth drove me.
I walked to it and did not wander off.

Those who saw me were amazed,
supposing me to be a strange person.

He who knew me and brought me up
is the summit of perfection.

amigo · 05-16-2005, 01:10 PM

Those are all great!!

A2J · 05-16-2005, 01:12 PM

solomans odes are so cool!!

Ode I
The Lord is on my head like a crown
and I shall not be without him.

The Crown of truth was woven for me,
and caused your branches to blossom in me.

The Crown is not dry and sterile.

You live
and blossomed on my head.

Your fruits are full and perfect
and filled with salvation.

It would be so good to be able to write tht well

amigo · 05-16-2005, 01:12 PM

I can't write at all though I do enjoy it! But you are a great writer!

A2J · 05-16-2005, 01:16 PM

lol....only the first ode is mine and compared to the 2 I posted of Soloman's mine looks patheic

amigo · 05-16-2005, 01:18 PM

I don't think so at all!

05-16-2005, 12:59 PM	#1
A2J A2J Edit Disciple	Ode to my father above.. This isnt very good but I just felt in the mood to write an ode.. An ode for anyone who dosent know is like tribute or praise... It is usually written really solemn but im goin 2 change it a bit. I just realized theres odes of Soloman....lol...didnt know tht. This is just pretty random though!!! Ode to my father above My father above is God.. He watches over me constantly Every step I take, he cares. He is amazing. He is loving too. He is my saviour and gives me my salvation. Without him is being without air God is essential We can never pay him back for his great sacrifice. He is the alpha and omega. help me be ready for the day he comes back.
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05-16-2005, 01:02 PM	#2
amigo amigo Edit Prophet/Prophetess	I thought that was great! Thank you for sharing it with us! I will show my ignorance but what in the world is an ode? __________________ He ain't the leavin' kind He'd never walk away Even from those who dont believe And wanna leave him behind He ain't the leavin' kind
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05-16-2005, 01:04 PM	#3
A2J A2J Edit Disciple	Its like a tribute to someone who is alive... Im not good explainin guff, so the opposite of ode is an elergy which would be written to someone who is dead...lol.... I dont know how to explain myself!!!
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05-16-2005, 01:06 PM	#4
amigo amigo Edit Prophet/Prophetess	I feel ya there! I can't explain anything well! __________________ He ain't the leavin' kind He'd never walk away Even from those who dont believe And wanna leave him behind He ain't the leavin' kind
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05-16-2005, 01:07 PM	#5
A2J A2J Edit Disciple	here's an ode i found on the net tht soloman has written...His are totally amazing and stunning The Odes of Solomon Ode XVII I was crowned by God, by a crown alive. and my Lord justified me. He became my certain salvation. I was freed from myself and uncondemned. The chains fell from my wrists. I took on the face and ways of a new person, walked in him and was redeemed. The thought of truth drove me. I walked to it and did not wander off. Those who saw me were amazed, supposing me to be a strange person. He who knew me and brought me up is the summit of perfection.
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05-16-2005, 01:10 PM	#6
amigo amigo Edit Prophet/Prophetess	Those are all great!! __________________ He ain't the leavin' kind He'd never walk away Even from those who dont believe And wanna leave him behind He ain't the leavin' kind
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05-16-2005, 01:12 PM	#7
A2J A2J Edit Disciple	solomans odes are so cool!! Ode I The Lord is on my head like a crown and I shall not be without him. The Crown of truth was woven for me, and caused your branches to blossom in me. The Crown is not dry and sterile. You live and blossomed on my head. Your fruits are full and perfect and filled with salvation. It would be so good to be able to write tht well
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05-16-2005, 01:16 PM	#9
A2J A2J Edit Disciple	lol....only the first ode is mine and compared to the 2 I posted of Soloman's mine looks patheic
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05-16-2005, 01:18 PM	#10
amigo amigo Edit Prophet/Prophetess	I don't think so at all! __________________ He ain't the leavin' kind He'd never walk away Even from those who dont believe And wanna leave him behind He ain't the leavin' kind
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