This Secret

05-16-2005, 12:34 PM

I wrote this song last night at 10... The song relates to what's been going on the past weekend...

I'm not good at coming up with melodies... so it's sung to the tune of Pieces by Sum 41.

This Secret

[Verse 1]
I tried to hide it, but nothing was working
You could see past my fake smile
You asked me what was wrong, but I just said nothing
I couldn’t tell you what’s been done

[Chorus]
I want nothing more than to tell you
This secret that lies in me
It’s eating away at my soul
I wish I could just let you know
The pain forced on me so long ago

[Verse 2]
How much longer do I have to keep this
From you - I don’t think that I can
Another tear falls from these cryptic eyes
That hides a secret deep inside

[Chorus]
I want nothing more than to tell you
This secret that lies in me
It’s eating away at my soul
I wish I could just let you know
The pain forced on me so long ago

[Verse 3]
I tried to hide it, but it still wasn’t working
You wanted to know what was wrong
Will I ever tell you the anguish I’ve been through?
God alone will keep me strong

[Chorus]
I want nothing more than to tell you
This secret that lies in me
It’s eating away at my soul
I wish I could just let you know
The pain forced on me so long ago

amigo · 05-16-2005, 12:35 PM

That was very moving, very touching! Thanks so much for sharing it with us!

05-16-2005, 12:37 PM

Thank you

My friend is starting a band and I'm going to sing... so I was trying to come up with some lyrics...

amigo · 05-16-2005, 12:38 PM

Oh wow! What an awesome opportunity for ya! When opportunity knocks open the door!

A2J · 05-16-2005, 12:40 PM

tht is such a cool song!!

PhiLRoXsZ · 05-16-2005, 03:15 PM

yay! such beauty. such truth. yay! I wish I was as good as this. but I never shall be.

-kte- hey that so ryhmes! lol!

05-16-2005, 03:17 PM

lol - thanks!

Hey, you rhymed... you might not be so bad afterall

05-16-2005, 03:22 PM

thats an awesome song! I hope the band stuff is working out. sorry this messge is so late, but i only joined maybe a week ago to this site? God Bless!

05-16-2005, 03:31 PM

lol - it's ok, I only posted this song here earlier today

Thanks, I hope the band works out too. The girl who started it and is playing guitar isn't saved... and I'm not sure if the girl who is playing the drums is saved either... so I'll have to be praying about that... and we need a bass player

JCroxmysox · 05-16-2005, 04:10 PM

Hey, that's awesome!

Really amazing lyrics!

05-16-2005, 12:34 PM	#1
Anna Anna Edit Guest	This Secret I wrote this song last night at 10... The song relates to what's been going on the past weekend... I'm not good at coming up with melodies... so it's sung to the tune of Pieces by Sum 41. This Secret [Verse 1] I tried to hide it, but nothing was working You could see past my fake smile You asked me what was wrong, but I just said nothing I couldn’t tell you what’s been done [Chorus] I want nothing more than to tell you This secret that lies in me It’s eating away at my soul I wish I could just let you know The pain forced on me so long ago [Verse 2] How much longer do I have to keep this From you - I don’t think that I can Another tear falls from these cryptic eyes That hides a secret deep inside [Chorus] I want nothing more than to tell you This secret that lies in me It’s eating away at my soul I wish I could just let you know The pain forced on me so long ago [Verse 3] I tried to hide it, but it still wasn’t working You wanted to know what was wrong Will I ever tell you the anguish I’ve been through? God alone will keep me strong [Chorus] I want nothing more than to tell you This secret that lies in me It’s eating away at my soul I wish I could just let you know The pain forced on me so long ago

05-16-2005, 12:35 PM	#2
amigo amigo Edit Prophet/Prophetess	That was very moving, very touching! Thanks so much for sharing it with us! __________________ He ain't the leavin' kind He'd never walk away Even from those who dont believe And wanna leave him behind He ain't the leavin' kind
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05-16-2005, 12:38 PM	#4
amigo amigo Edit Prophet/Prophetess	Oh wow! What an awesome opportunity for ya! When opportunity knocks open the door! __________________ He ain't the leavin' kind He'd never walk away Even from those who dont believe And wanna leave him behind He ain't the leavin' kind
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05-16-2005, 12:40 PM	#5
A2J A2J Edit Disciple	tht is such a cool song!!
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05-16-2005, 03:15 PM	#6
PhiLRoXsZ PhiLRoXsZ Edit Disciple	yay yay! such beauty. such truth. yay! I wish I was as good as this. but I never shall be. -kte- hey that so ryhmes! lol! __________________ Without a sound, I let you slip away.
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05-16-2005, 12:37 PM	#3
Anna Anna Edit Guest	Thank you My friend is starting a band and I'm going to sing... so I was trying to come up with some lyrics...

05-16-2005, 03:17 PM	#7
Anna Anna Edit Guest	lol - thanks! Hey, you rhymed... you might not be so bad afterall

05-16-2005, 03:22 PM	#8
Glitterface Glitterface Edit Guest	thats an awesome song! I hope the band stuff is working out. sorry this messge is so late, but i only joined maybe a week ago to this site? God Bless!

05-16-2005, 03:31 PM	#9
Anna Anna Edit Guest	lol - it's ok, I only posted this song here earlier today Thanks, I hope the band works out too. The girl who started it and is playing guitar isn't saved... and I'm not sure if the girl who is playing the drums is saved either... so I'll have to be praying about that... and we need a bass player

05-16-2005, 04:10 PM	#10
JCroxmysox JCroxmysox Edit Prophet/Prophetess	Hey, that's awesome! Really amazing lyrics! __________________ Lord take my broken heart/ Take all of my mistakes Please take all of me/ I want to show great You are xXx RACH xXx
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