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Old 04-28-2005, 11:26 PM   #1
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some more poem/song thingees

~~*Universe*~~

every day when i open my eyes
i see your love revolvin around me.
anytime good or bad all i have to do is call on you!

Chorus.
to call on the God if this whole universe
all i have to do
is think of you
no matter what i can and cant do
just think,think of you!

to think that you care about me
who am i compared to your matchless majesty?
a grain of sand a whisp of wind
a tiny star thats twinkling

but you loved me so much
that you gave your life for me!
you loved me.

Bridge. and to thik that you wanna love me
who am i compared to your matchless majesty?



.:.Pain.:.

ive heard youll meet me where i am
i sure hope thats right
cuz right now ill put down my guard
ill expose the flesh thats still in my heart.
im not sure if you could love me
ive strayed too far away
have i changed so much you dont remember me?

chorus. are you listening to my silent screams
i cant shout anymore!
can you see me?
will you look for a second, look for a second
and see
im in pain.
pain.
pain.


ive cryed too much and ive bled the scars.
are you strong enought to break the bars that bind my heart?
Shatter the chains that hold me down.
Do i need to ask for a miracle?

Do i have to chant the chant,
dance the dance.
Do i have to act anymore,
im so sick of this drama.
please speak the words that will make me pure again.
Innocent.


"'"I know"'"

baby, i can see the pain
i can hear your rain
i know youre going out of your mind.
ive heard your please
i am always here,near to you.
and you will find your purpose in life
if you listen to me,
i am whispering....

chorus.
i know your pain
i can hear your rain
an all i wanna do is love you.
i wanna take you in my arms
keep you from all harms
tell you itll be ok.i can relate.
dont five up on me, ididnt give up on you.
i love you.

child i see the blood
i feel the cuts a
nd every day i see the scars
theres nothing i dont know
not the pain not the hurt
not the stuff youve done wrong
i am whisperring....


__Do you?__

do you know my name
the thoughts that race through my head?
can you hear my screams
can you feel my tears
as they fall like the winter rain.
have you fingered the scars
that decorate my heart?
do you know my name?
why cant i feel normal,
the same?




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this verse:

child i see the blood
i feel the cuts a
nd every day i see the scars
theres nothing i dont know
not the pain not the hurt
not the stuff youve done wrong
i am whisperring....


is about my cutting and stuff. i just poured everything i felt into it. . i think its realy significant. anyway. . yea. .
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Old 04-29-2005, 12:45 AM   #2
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I'm really, really proud of you for putting your emotions with cutting into some amazing work!! That's a huge step in the right direction! I don't know your situation...but I've been though a lot of self harm stuff and I know that writing about it has really helped me to release a lot of my emotions...keep it up! You write beautifully!!
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Old 05-05-2005, 10:55 PM   #3
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hey. . thanks. :D im smiling ear to . . uh. . ear. (is that. . uh, never mind)
i had more but my mom destroyed them. . cuz they were super satanic/depressing. . and wrong. lol. . . anyway. ill pm you!
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Old 05-05-2005, 11:08 PM   #4
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Wow that was an awesome peice! I'm gonna have to read it again cause I'm sure I've missed somethings. What a song. Amazing. Thank you for being so open and willing to share. TY TY TY
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Old 05-05-2005, 11:42 PM   #5
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:D :D :D :D wow . . thanks. thats awesome! i dont like them that much. . but hey others do lol!
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Old 05-06-2005, 10:10 PM   #6
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Quote:
Originally Posted by *Anne*
hey. . thanks. :D im smiling ear to . . uh. . ear. (is that. . uh, never mind)
i had more but my mom destroyed them. . cuz they were super satanic/depressing. . and wrong. lol. . . anyway. ill pm you!
I'm sorry that your Mom destroyed your other poems and things..but maybe it was for the best? Especially if they were really depressing....Thanks for the PM...I look forward to getting to know you more...and keep sending more poetry this way!!
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Old 05-19-2005, 10:57 PM   #7
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lol ill take you to your word and plague you with some more!!

Fountains of love

ive tried every way
to tell you i love you
i was trying to say
ive spelled it in the clouds
in those tiny diamonds.
ive cryed in in the rain
engraved in every snowflake.
i tried to tell you
i know that kind of pain
when no one seems to know
when no one seems to care.
too much love...

(chorus)To hide in the mountaints
to shout in the valleys
to sing in the rain
to kiss in the moonlight
to wipe away your pain
to speak in the fountais,
fountains of love.

ive tryed every way to show my love
to speak,to say,
what more could convince you?
ive writen it in code
at your finger tips.
ive drawn my love as the live flows through your heart,
i know,
when your live feels torn apart
when your heart feels cut in half,
i know.
but love.
Too much love. .

bridge. i love you,i tried whispering
and shouting and screaming it out
love love love im all about.
i knew you,
before the first beat of your heart
i loved you before the tears they had to start.



ill get some more in a few. .
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Old 05-19-2005, 11:15 PM   #8
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beautiful...you have great talent!!
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Old 05-19-2005, 11:39 PM   #9
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fix my eyes on you


why is it so hard
to push against the current?
why is it so hard
to go against the crowd?
every time i think im doin well
my ground begins to crumble
every time i think im alright
my earth begins to rumble.
whenever i try to walk on water
the water becomes my tears.
every time i try to still the sea and hush the waves
the rain pours crimpson red.
its alright its ok,
just play the game our way!
will i listen,
will i turn away,
will i fix my eyes on you?
will i listen,
will i turn away,
will i fix my eyes on you?

Will my faith hold up for one more time,
if i fix my eyes on you?
will tge rain shut up for this one time
if i fix my eyes on you?
will the water stay crystal glass till im through,
if i fix myeyes on you?
fix my eyes on you,
please fix my eyes on you!

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crazy thing

i thought about
jus how crazy the world is.
people sleepin around
drunks guzzling down
an just a crazy crazy world.

but the craziest thing
accualy came from You.
how could you send your son
to die for us.
or have i jus misunderstood?

is there some trick?
how couldja love us so?
is there a reason for this love?

i thought about
that you love me
do you know what ive done
just how fat ive gone astray?
do you know about the scars
its a messy messy heart.
but ya love me still,
yea you love me still!

*****************

baby boy ( i love this one!)

youre not yet one
you cant talk alot
and youre little mind doesnt understand.
and im sitting here
thinking about when ill have to tell you
that youre mammas gone,run off again.
and your daddys dead.
that youve been stuffed with crack
and left to die,
baby boy!
innocent bystander,
it wasnt your fault.

chorus. i wish i could tell you,
that your live will turn out happy.
i wish i could hold you,
forever,
and never let you go.
baby boy,
i wish the world was kinder.
oh baby boy,
baby boy.

when i found you you were cold,
shivering.
your tiny bodu shook.
and now all i want to tell you is,
there is hope there is love.
be strong, baby boy, be strong.
there is some love hidden in the valleys of this word.
look on ,look on.
be strong baby boy,
be strong.

bridge. baby boy,
with your brown eyes.
baby boy,
trust me,
i wont hurt your tiny body.
look on, be strong,baby boy.
oh baby boy!

***************

rag dolls and teddy bears

you cry, on your knees
whishin this life were kinder .
your tears fall, like the rain,
an one drops of a teddy bear.
teddy bears are your passion,
but rag dolls you hate.
cuz as he screamed and cursed
he picked one up and threw it against the wall.
then he did the same with you.

rag doll,
limbs crooked,
lies next to a child in tears.
"PLEASE HELP!"she screams
but the rag doll still smiles.
the rag doll smiles.

you tried to understand
why the rag doll smiled
didnt she know
couldnt she feel.
why was a smile painted on her lips?

cry ,rag doll,
just one time.
teddy bear, cry,
just like me.

********************

baby angels

God looked on
and there,
standing alone,
was a tiny ,little baby.
"your life isnt over yet" he smiled,
"what a joke your pulling".
but as her looked closer,
the child had no arms.
"what did they do you you?"
he cried
"my mommie didnt want me,
my daddy thought the same,
so they got rid of me the easiest way."
it hurt Gods heart to hear it
but the time had finnaly come,
a yearly, twelve month holocaust
like none.

theres baby angels in heaven
thier still alive.
God spare our children
God save our kids,
babies babies in heaven
and yet here there are so few,
God love our babies,
that the careless slew.
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Again, beautiful!! Keep 'em coming! I especially liked "Rag Dolls and Teddy Bears" great job!!
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